LOVE IT!!! i wish you did more to it has alot of potential i would honestly love to see what sesshomaru's POV was on all of this cuase most of this is kagome's POV. :D
| Whooo! -fans self- if that was your first lemon written and posted, then you're a damn good writer! Love it as a oneshot but wouldn't mind if you did more :3    
 
Kar (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 May 2012 | this could totally be something more.... i want it to be something more.... please let it be something more... onegai?!?!? lol it was great!!!!! KAR    
 
Kar (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 May 2012 | this could totally be something more.... i want it to be something more.... please let it be something more... onegai?!?!? lol it was great!!!!! KAR    
 | I like it. Very well written. Can't wait to read more    
       
 
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