Eeeee!!! I LOOOOOVE this chapter in particular! So much that I had to review it and let you know! At first I was like, "I'll just review at the end!" and then I saw this line: "“I suggest you stop thinking what you are thinking, or I will begin doing what you are thinking.”" And I was like... I LOVE that line so much that I should mention it. But now it's like... I'm in love with an ENTIRE CHAPTER! Especially the last few paragraphs about that kiss. It's just... so... indescribably awesome!! I squealed!
But it's not to say that I didn't like the other chapters. I loved them too. I love your humor - you're very funny. But it's just this chapter!! AHHH!!!!
Hello! Cute little story you've got here, I enjoy reading it! :) I like the light atmosphere you've created between the pair and the humorous snippets.
There were a couple of things I wanted to point out, however. Firstly, at the end of chapter 6 you state that Sesshomaru lets Inuyasha keep the Tensaiga because it seals his demon blood. I think you mean Tetsusaiga (or Tessaiga - both versions are acceptable, I believe).
Also, you mention that Sesshomaru saves Kagome from Magatsuhi. Do you mean Mukotsu, the poison wielder from the Shichinintai? I know he does kinda defend her from Inuyasha (who is possessed by Magatsuhi) in the Final Act, but it occurs right before they destroy Naraku, and – judging from what I’ve read – your story is based around a time before any of that happens.
Anywho, I’m not trying to seem like a know-it-all or anything like that, I just thought I would bring it up. I know I certainly appreciate it when people point out my booboos, cuz sometimes I get lazy when I edit and I miss stuff.
Good stuff! I'm off to read the rest!
SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! More warm fuzzies for me to read!!!! What a delicious tale; so cute, so fuzzy, so... so... SQUEEEE-worthy!!! Ugh, and now I'm abusing the punctuation again, but I just can't help myself! I love this to PIECES and BACK! Still, so ADORABLE!! Definitely going on my fave list for reading again and again!
:D
~~Wiccan~~