Please continue I want to know what happens next.
| Hello, I realize it has been a while since you have updated this story. But I was was going through my favourite list and reread this one. I love it! I hope your health is taking a turn for the better and you continue writing, either here or elsewhere. You truly are a gifted writer. Take care. :)    
 
trisha allen (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jun 2013 | hope to read more soon    
 
 (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Dec 2012 | This story, nor my others, have been forgotten, I promise...it's not a waste. My health and trying to get back on my feet has gotten in the way. I appreciate the patience from you all. :)    
 | I remember this, I read it a while back... seems like it didn't get anywhere yet. What a waste... then agian it might not have been so long ago, if that's the case then ignore this... I've been getting worse at keeping things straight recently.    
 | This is such an adorable and funny story. :)  I look forward to your next chapter.   SS    
 
 (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 May 2012 | Again, THANK YOU GUYS ALL SO MUCH FOR THE READS & AWESOME REVIEWS!!! I'm HALFWAY through part 3, but I've encountered a slight hiccup...more like a fork in the road and I'm trying to decide which path will be the best choice. Damn plot bunnies! LOL! But seriously, I am so happy otherwise! Love you guys tons!!    
 | I really like your fic. ;-; Hope Kagome somehow gets out. Can't wait for the next installment.        
 
Nyx (Chapter 2) - Thu 03 May 2012 | Love it! Especially Inuyasha's reaction in the previous chapter. PS: You marked this story as completed by mistake. Unless it's over. (Not likely because of the cliffy.) That would make us (readers) sad.    
 | Ooooh I can't wait to see what happens next! I wanna know if she kicks the bucket or lives lol update soon when you can! ^.^    
 | Good story.  Can't wait to see where it goes.  Love the banter. :)    
 
Cass (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012 | I love their banter! you're doing great!    
 | Hilarious series and I loved the banter between Sesshoumaru and Kagome in the first chapter, very entertaining :)    
 | Aw nuts! Talk about a cliff hanger! I like this story.    
 
TKE (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012 | awesome!!! I love the suspense!!    
 | Im enjoying this so far and glad I clicked on the recommended link for it.  Somehow you managed to make the whole lake/drowning scene with Kagome relaxing and peaceful rather than angsty which I think was a unique choice. Also, good job with handling the emotions in the beginning. I'm glad you haven't made everything so easy and simple for the couple. But anyway, update soon. :) -E.C.    
 | I am glad this was recommended on the forum (I don't normally stop to read fanfics unless someone really says 'hey, go read this' and makes a fuss, lol- I'm not a snob or an elitist by any means, I just usually don't read because when I do I tend to get caught up and then I forget all about working on my own stories).  I do think maybe you could use a beta-reader, it's enjoyable and an easy read, but I feel as if some of the smaller points (correct placement of commas and such) could do with a little tidying up.  It didn't trip up my reading, but I can be a nit-picker about such things. I do think you did a fantastic job of portraying that very unique, and occassionally difficult to explain, feel of reluctantly being in love and it would be terrible if you didn't continue.  I hope to see Sesshomaru respond to her call and come to the rescue, but I await your next chapter, no matter what the next step is.    
 
Pebbles (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012 | Honestly, I was expecting some sort of humorous continuation from the first.  However, this works too.  And it was written like how experiencing something like that would happen: quick and without warning.  If that's what you were going for, you succeeded.  The trepidation in Inuyasha's inner thought is sooo characteristic to a panic attack.  Of all people to call upon, I would assume it'd be Sessh when in a panic.  I wonder how she will be saved.... Thank you for continuing!  ^-^    
 | Part two was amzingly written, you really put alot of feeling and emotion into it. I enjoy how you can go from humor and sarcasm to emotional dama. now I REALLY am dying for the next part! I hope you end up getting recognized for your writing one day...and fanart too. I'd draw something for you, but stick people is the best i can do lol. ;) 
    
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