Reviews for Mystery Miko by Suka25

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MythMagykFae (Chapter 30) - Sun 08 Feb 2015

LOVED this story { : I couldn't stop reading (now 3 am oops lol) 


MLMonty (Chapter 3) - Sat 30 Mar 2013

I never understood why Kagome's clothes would change just because her concealment dropped. I mean what are her parents secretly dressing her in slut wear at night and the concealment is covering it up? Ugh, I think I gave myself nightmares with that random thought.


demon (Chapter 30) - Fri 07 Sep 2012

Make a sequel please. how many pups do they have? how does sesshomaru cope with the modern era? what kiind of trouble does inuyasha get into? i want to know. i hardly ever review but when i do the story is great and i demand a sequel to it. thank you for the wonderful story. keep up the good work.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 30) - Sat 02 Jun 2012

This story was great I enjoyed it.


sarah duffy (Chapter 30) - Thu 24 May 2012

this was amazing. i wish it was not over. keep up the good work and wriitng. 


cassandra (Chapter 30) - Tue 10 Apr 2012

I really liked this story and I hope you write many more that are just as good!


TKE (Chapter 30) - Tue 10 Apr 2012

That was awesome!!! It tugged at my heart strings....


cassandra (Chapter 29) - Mon 09 Apr 2012

I can't wait to see her reaction when she sees everyone!


cassandra (Chapter 26) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

This is getting good! I hope Inuyasha is able to protect her untill Sesshomaru gets back.


jenny (Chapter 24) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

I like this story but the last chapter with Sessh hiding sooo much from her....he doesn't trust her but he expects her to trust him?  Him loving a miko,not telling her the truth of what she'll be facing.    She's a Miko-Inu Youkai,not just a miko. He doesn't treat her with respect , honor and trust...is she blind? It's like she's just following him blindly with heroworship.  To take an innocent with no experience, no knowledge of sex, youkai customs or anything .........and basically,chain her beast,force her to submit and take her as a mate........without giving her choices and telling her the honest truth about himself and his past until after their mated...is that fair to her??? After years of 1st being 2nd to Kikyo,how could she not, in the back of her mind,feel like (with Sessh) she'll forever be 2nd to Midoriko ???  I feel terrible for Kagome, Midoriko screws up in making the jewel & Kikyo screws up and has the jewel burned with her body and poor Kagome has to not only clean up both of their messes but be 2nd in Inu's and now Sessh's heart. If I was her I'd finish this crap up and run away for sometime to myself. I don't think I could do it.  After hearing that he was in love with Midoriko, won't she want to know if Sessh had asked Midoriko to be his mate? Or ask him what he'd want to do if Midoriko came back to life when the jewel is complete,will he want Midoriko as his mate? Or ask Sessh how he would  feel if she told him,there's a powerful Inu youkai who loves me in the future but that's in 500 years and your dead then so you don't need to know about it(Hee hee make him feel insecure).

I wouldn't be surprised if she feels she needs time to herself ,after she's done with her duties for the fates, to sort out her future.


jenny (Chapter 22) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

I know I missed a few days and I'm just catching up but I'm confused. This thing between Sessh and Kagome just seems like it's happening so fast and it's kind of odd that she's so accepting of him suddenly wanting to be her mate(out of nowhere),without questioning him...

In the beginning they go to her home for a day, for her 21st b-day,she learns she's a Miko/Inu youkai (of a rare Inu breed),she learns that her dad is hated by Sessh for attempting to assassinate his mom long ago and that Sessh banished him from the lands. Upon returning to the past, before getting a chance to explain to her friends(or Sessh) what she is or what she learned, she has a run-in with Naraku and before she can explain anything to anyone=they all see her youkai form (the Inu's out of the bag), even Sessh shows up and sees her. She doesn't know that Sessh spoke to her dad while she was unconscious after her fight with Naraku by the well and when she wakes up and see's him, he's angry. She's expecting Sessh to hate her but like the next day she's abducted by Naraku,who tries to assault her,she freaks out & has a power overload,kills Naraku & has her 1st transformation into her beast. Just as she's about try to kill and maim, suddenly Sessh shows up to the rescue but instead of anger/distrust or hatred, she's knocked out by him and wakes up in a cave,on an island,with an enchanted collar and leash on and he won't tell her anything,he's acting crazy and he even kisses her ..she and her beast can't figure out what is going on and so they are trying to think up a way to escape but the next time they wake up he's nice to her...shouldn't this seem bizarre to her? She had the 1 dream of Tashio but he didn't give her any real info, she doesn't know about having Sessh's mark on her shoulder but the next thing she knows is she's mating Sessh. It just seemed odd that she didn't ask him what happened, don't you hate my dad and you were pissed off at me,why do you suddenly want me as your mate? She's not suspicious of him,she trusts him completely??

 Was her dad a known youkai assassin or just a friend of Tashio's who agreed to try to kill Tashio's 1st mate for him(like,as a favour)?  What happened to the jewel,where is it? Isn't that a major thing? It just seems odd-1 day she learns what she is,a day later Naraku abducts her & tries to rape her,she kills him, transforms for her 1st time, quick battle (or attack) by Sessh,wakes up chained in a cave,dreams of Tashio,wakes up mates Sessh, falls asleep & has another Tashio dream,gets 2 swords & is told a friend or friends are Naraku's spawn & she has a day to learn to control her beast, absorb the fact that she's mated(for life),learn how to use a sword and return and face hell???

Poor thing,it hasn't even been a week...she's going to lose it. I don't know how she just accepts it all and doesn't ask questions.... I still have more chapters to read and hopefully I'll understand. I can't wait.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 21) - Wed 04 Apr 2012

As much as I like Kouga... if his instinct told him to avoid Tetsusaiga back when he first met Inuyasha because of its danger to him then he is no match for SESSHOMARU. Hopefully his instinct will again be heeded before he has to be fought.

Thanks for writing.


Susan (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

You spelled through wrong but great story love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


cassandra (Chapter 19) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

Yay! They finally got together!


jenny (Chapter 19) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

I loved this chapter. I'm dying to know if Kagome will get Sessh's Mark on her forehead now, as his Mate and Lady of The Western Lands or if she will get any other markings??  I'm curious to know more about the 'Rare breed' of Inu Youkai that Kagome and her Dad are,(In Ch.10 she found a box with a note & dagger inside & in the note her Dad wrote it said-(copy&paste)-This dagger has been passed down through the generations to the knew leader of our line. The Myou Tsuki line. You are all that is left of our line. Be safe my koi.) and I wanted to know if this means that she is a Myou Tsuki Inu Youkai,and the Heir,next or new leader of them? Since she was actually given the note and dagger 500yrs in the future,does that mean there are still some of her pack or clan members living, in the past,where her dad is already exiled but, she is now? Will she (we) see or find any of them? Will we ever get a physical description of what Kagome looks like in her beast inu form (her large Inu form)? ..(like how we know Sessh's beast form is a huge white/silver Inu?)  

 We know from Ch.2, when Kagome asked her parents what type of youkai they both were ..(copy & paste)-Before either one of them could say anything Inuyasha spoke up. “I don’t know what your mom is but Hirokai is a rare Inu. His fur is black and green like his hair. He is even rarer than Sesshoumaru because Hirokai is bigger.” He said as he walked up behind Kagome. Kagome looked at her father who nodded confirming the truth.

I know Kagome's basically still a pup compared to her dad, and even though she's now an adult, she's still 'young' compared to Sessh,right?  So would it mean that even though she's a larger breed because she's young (& only had her 1st transformation) she probably still isn't as big as Sessh is at this point,right??? I was wondering if we'd find out how old she is in youkai years and how old Sessh in human years. Since they're mated now (which is equal to or more permanent then a human marriage) wouldn't Kagome want to know more about him and since she grew up in present time, where almost everyone in a committed relationship's biggest fear is being cheated on(& she knows that Sessh's dad had Inu with another female,or maybe worse-took her as a 2nd mate?), wouldn't she be worried that Sessh would take a 2nd mate (mistress or concubines?) and (as Kagome isn't one to not ask questions that are important to her life & her heart) wouldn't she want (or demand) to know exactly what kind of situation she's now bonded into for life, and especially regarding monogamy? Once she get's her bearings again, I can just picture her refusing to sleep with him again until he answers all of her questions..but, till then...I wonder if they'll mate in their beast forms(I know,I'm such a perv!!).

I meant to ask this before but was there a reason she had to go see her parent's, I mean, did they 'have to' or 'need to' remove the spell that concealed her youkai because she was about to turn 21 (in human yrs) and/or did it mean she'd reached the age of maturity for a youkai? If they didn't, would she have started to go through changes that couldn't be stopped (like when her beast 1st emerged at Naraku's, she dildn't have control & all it wanted, was to kill/fight) and if they'd left the spell on her would it have been dangerous for her (& others)? Would her beast have emerged (without warning) with nobody knowing or understanding what was happening to her? I also wanted to know about what the Kami's have to do with Kagome or her birth because both her dad and Sessh's dad mentioned that the Kami's were involved. !st-Her dad told Sessh- She is unique, my daughter, my Kagome. She was given to us by the Kami’s themselves.” ,2nd-Sessh dad (Tashio)showed up in Kagome's dream and said-So the Kami’s and I have come to a decision.”-but, he never told her what He & the Kami's decided or what it had to do with her & 3rd- when Tashio came to Sessh in his dream he told his son- The Kamis have granted me the permission to speak to you and Kagome while you asleep.” The reason I have come is to tell you that you must make Kagome submit when you wake. She will fight you but I have faith that you will find a way to do it. The reason I have told you this is because she is your missing half. Kagome is light to your dark. Why do you think she was never afraid of you? Even after all the times you tried to kill her and her friends.” Sessh replied,“What you say has merit. Is that the reason for my symbol on her shoulder?” Tashio nodded.It was put there for you to know that she is yours. It had been concealed when her father put a masking spell on her but when he removed the spell it was revealed. I suspect that Inuyasha has seen it but has said nothing.” Tashio looked at his son and stepped towards him and put his hand on his left shoulder. “You should have known that Kagome was made for you. No mikos are able to heal a demon, full blooded or half.”          Also,I'm dying to know how his mark was put on Kagome & who did it or was it the Kami's.

I'm dying to read more and I'm sorry for always writing so much,please let me know if this is a problem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Duchess Of Darkness (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Your story was cute....very different from what im used to reading so it was a refreshing change of pace from my usually dark tastes. I hope reading more would enlighten me to a more ....how should I say...lighter side of things....>_< Keep Up The Great WOrk....I loved it

D.O.D


Venita (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

Love the story, please update soon.


jenny (Chapter 17) - Fri 30 Mar 2012

I really like this story. I'm glad Kagome changed into her beast form because it is proof that Kagome is a full youkai and not hanyou (I still don't know why she thought SHE was hanyou after her dad explained that because of her mom beng a hanyou with miko blood she birthed full youkai,maybe she was confused because he said something about having the option to birth hanyou's with a human husband/mate?). I think she should now realize that she's full Inu miko/youkai,I can't wait to see what powers she'll have and I wish there was a description of what she looks like in her Inu beast form. I just recalled that in Ch.14 as Sessh was trying to get to where Naraku had taken her Kagome,this happened: He could feel Kagome’s beast calling to him for help. He had no idea how it was possible but he that it was because of the feelings in him. His beast snorted and told him that he loved her that is why he felt that way. Sesshoumaru thought about what his beast said as he made his way to Naraku’s castle. 

 Did Kagome get Sessh's mark on her shoulder when his beast bit her beasts neck at Naraku's place (?),and if so,did his beast do it on purpose because it already decided it wanted to mate her? I don't know what the mark on her shoulder represents or what Sessh is planning because his words and actions are confusing. He took her to a secluded island with a cave that was already set up with a collar and chain that's enchanted to keep her body from transforming (into her beast form) and then he told her she wouldn't need clothing. Now, maybe it's just me but, between  telling her that she won't be needing clothing (for whatever he's got planned) and the fact that he took her to an already prepared secluded den, doesn't it seem to imply that he plans to do more than just get her to agree to submit to him? Couldn't she have clothing if he just wanted her to submit?  I mean he said his mom used a similar collar and chain to keep him from transforming and allowing his beast control until he learned to tame and control his inner beast (Since he said he'd already killed 11 guards by the time she got the collar on him) from going on a rampage. I'm dying to know what he's planning and why he took her to this prepared cave/den. I didn't think he'd need such privacy or for her not to have clothes if he just wanted her to submit because of when he bit her neck at Naraku's he asked if she submitted and when she relaxed he thought she agreed and he let her go, only to find she'd tricked him but,doesn't that show that he took her to this island with another purpose(that he just may not realize what it is because he's acting out of instinct)? Even though he likes to believe he's in full control (he probably believed he controlled his inner beast but if his inner beast is aware of it's feelings,wants and desires..it would seem Sessh forgot that he & his beast are one and the same,2 halves of himself.)and he always denies having feelings or needing anyone else but at some point in time he obviously set up this cave and it would appear that it was set up with a specific intent, yes or no?

After he saw his mark on Kagome's neck he couldn't figure out how it got there, does he not recall when he bit her neck twice and then used a growl to put her to sleep before he took her to this island? I hope he figures it out before he wakes up or she wakes up. I wonder where the jewel is. I can't wait for the next chapter.


jenny (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Mar 2012

I like this story but there are a few things I don't understand. Her dad is a rare breed of (full) Inu youkai but what does the symbol on his forehead mean and what does Kagomes symbol look like if Inu saw it and noticed the moon wasn't facing the same direction( and why would she need to hide her form now)?  Why did Kagome call herself a hanyou after her dad juust told her that her mom being a miko-hanyou birthed full youkai pups(or offspring),wouldn't that make Kagome a rare full inu-youkai/miko? Also if she's a rare type of Inu youkai then wouldn't her dad need to teach her how to use some powers she inherited from him? I also don't understand why Kagome would still be wearing her middle school uniform if she was turning 21.. I still have more chapters left to read and I'm excited to see if I can find out more. 


cassandra (Chapter 16) - Thu 29 Mar 2012

Aw nuts! Just when it was getting good you had to go and stop! Nice touch by putting Taisho in there by the way.


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