Oh nooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

this story is really good. i do wish the chapters were longer, but i think the story's awesome. please update soon:)

Just found this story.  Intriguing!  I'm looking forward to where it goes!

I like it!

Loved! I think it's awesome you can get so much across without even having dialogue. Can't wait to see more from you!

So..... I'm liking this. This is a real time scenario and I dig it. It was a simple wish which was not beyond the boundaries of basic thoughts and emotions. I like how it's playing out. She's not some oh so good, I won't ever do that, I'm soo giving persona. Not that it's a bad thing but I like the change.

Great work.

I'm interested.

Cherry 

I don't think I would care why he agreed either! I really like the flow of this, and how you are able to say what is needed without the characters talking it out. Can't wait for the next update!

ooohhh! Snap!!! she's gonna take him down!! <3 go Girl! get that demon!!! <3    >w<

that was good writting.  no wasted word, emotions in detail without dragging.  again, good work

Found It!!! It's a nice little drabble too. I think it will be a great read for anyone who loves your work, like me.

Hugs
Alpine ^_^

Well, I have got to say that I'm looking forwards to this! I thoroughly enjoy all your other work, so I'm glad I caught onto this one!