this was amazing. keep up the amazing work and writing
All five chapters are great, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Mar 2012
Keep it coming.
Venita (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Mar 2012
Who's watching them, is it Naraku? Please update soon.
Being watched? >_> <_< Hn.
On to the next chap
Hn... I wonder I wonder what will happen now...
Hn.... I thought Kagome was younger :cries: My mental image changed some :'(
However, I am still very interested in the plot :)
Oh! This first chap is very good! I actually envisioned it in manga style and everything! Good descriptions and I really liked the interaction between the cousins :)
Venita (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Mar 2012
Thank you for both chapters, please update soon.
aww so cute.
I just thought it would be interesting to see someone elude The Great Sesshomaru with a technique that only he seems to be able to use. Ooo is he is gonna learn not to mess with Kagome. Please upload soon.
Venita (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
I can't wait for the chapter, please update soon.
Ooo, nice. Maybe she will use her cloud to elude him. He would not expect a miko to be able to fly so might not check the sky.
Please upload soon.
Venita (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Mar 2012
Great story, please update soon.
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