I love this story. Write soon please!!!
| Wonderful story, more please, I love your writing style!    
 
Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012 | Well the story is good but you have lots of technical problems, proper names are always capitalized, I, I'm & I've are capitalized & when you add ing to words ending in e you take the e out, like making.    
 
TKE (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012 | awwww....so sweet!!!  and poor inuyasha....lmao!    
       
 
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