Hahaha! I literally loled when I read that last line! I am a bit disappointed I didn't get to see Kagome rip into him, but the ending was just great!

LOL!!!!! oh that was just HAHAHAHAHA!

This is freakin awesome! I laughed so hard I cried. Great job.

XD omg that hilarious!

Loved it!

Funy on a stick, thank you for making my day!

That was great! Very funny!

Oh thank you avadrea! you just made a bleak day side spliting. really like the humor. LOV THE MIROKU DOORMAT!

keep it coming

love scarlet

Hahahahhaa. Bird watching, indeed. Poor Sesshy doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. :D

~~XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Ohhhhh that was GREAT! Fantastic, chica!

Well the plot is good, you have rather weird errors though since about half the time you use things correctly & then the other half they're goofed, like were/where & definitely/defiantly. Where/were examples; "Where" refers to a question about a place or location of something, such as: "Where is our table?" "Were" is the plural form of "was." For example:"I WAS at the concert last night. We WERE there all together with my friends." Definitely is a form of definite, you're sure about something, defiantly is along the lines of your mother wears army boots or so's your old man. You also have missing words here & there of the the, as, etc kind.

Hilarious! Sesshoumaru actually answered "Bird Watching" LMAO!! And Miroku got socked in the head by some kind of soap bottle, then stomped on by Kagome as she made her way over. I absolutely loved it and I'm hoping for more soon.

--Kaminoko

OMG.....soooo busted....LMAO!!!