| So far so good  i like where  this  story going  but  there are tons  of  mistake  that  need to be  corrected some of these sentances doesn't make any sense at all  but i believe i know where you trying to  go  , so  if you   have the time please try fixing  them  , if  not you can always  ask  for a beta reader ; I really like this story   so please dont  be discourage  by  my review  i just  want to help you at  anyway i can ,  :3  .       
   Page 1 of 2 
 
										 |