Overall I liked it. I really liked the descriptive language that flows through this piece. The story grabbed my intrest from the beginning and didn't let go. The only complaint that I have is it seems more like the prologue or first chapter of a longer tale. It makes me want to know how Sesshoumaru and Kagome met and how their relationship developed. This one shot seems to be begging to be continued.
WOW. Okay first of all, I at the beginning, I was like she's a genius, cause I could not have pulled anything mechanic was. I probably wouldn't be able to describe - well nothing ahah! But it adds to the story A LOT I feel especially with the way it ties with his past. I don't know if it makes sense. I was really surprised by his arm, but it such a nice detail (especially considering canon), And seriously, the reason he lost it - wow. GIRL YOU ARE TUGGING AT MY HEART STRINGS. I couldn't stop aweing at the end because of him and Kagome.
Seriously. This was was SO FREAKING GOOD. I should be glaring at you for doing such a good job. Lmao, no but really, I loved it. You're a fantastic writer!
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