Really loving the idea behind this story. Its original, invigorating and quite cute, in my opinion.:)

Lol! Sesshoumaru was probably miffed that a child could outdraw him. :P

ROFL Sesshomaru playing fetch? Priceless

Well this would be enough to make any other wary but not Kagome :)

swords don't kill people... ancient deadly taiyoukai kill people

but seriously, good lesson for kags to learn

I really like the idea behind your story, and I can't wait for more!

Ooh I wonder what will happen next! I think your story is beautifully written.

Is Kagome a child or young teen?

Youre writing in the wrong tense. The present is used more for almost a suspense full ending; example "And still she sits."

Your telling the story so the action should have already happened. " she sat, waiting for him to reappear. Sota couldnt even tempt her with meaningless games" .....

Its a good story but youve been writing out of tense since the first chapter and its extremly distracting.

Is this going to be in line with CU or is it AU all the way? Lol! Where did  Sesshoumaru go? Poor Kagome waiting for a glimpse of him. Lol!

And where did he come from? From the well? Please update soon. This is so intriguing. :P

ooOOOOOoooo I wonder where he came from...

"Every step is grace and beauty personified" That is officially my favourite line!!! I'm loving the story so hurry up and update more often....please?

O - O I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update!

This story sounds so interesting! I cannot wait to read more.

hehe i'm anxious to see how this goes