That 'a girl, Kagome. Be a strong willed thing. You are not weak. Do not bow. Be brave, Kagome; be brave and strong. You are almost done

"This battle is mine to deal with, Inuyasha," the demon captain insisted firmly.

"Haven't you learned anything?!" his brother shouted back, making his way to the inu's side. "Dad fell into Naraku's trap all those years ago – don't you repeat his mistakes! Let me help you!"

That. That right there. That is one of the best pieces of character development I have ever seen. A++

Also, fuck. I hate it when I get predictions wrong. >.>

She chose... she CHOSE the protector?

Im betting more and more she would have chosen Souta, her unborn baby, knowing that his body would be cast in to the sea and protecting her daughters the best way she knew how.

I really ought to go back and reread the prophecy, but I am too close to the end to stop now!

Ah hell, Naraku just murder balled Muso, didn't he?

I suppose Ill find out soon

Oh man. Please. Please let Souta have the jewel. it would be just... just so perfect. Please let it not have to be a daughter... please let it have to a a CHILD of the ocean.

TREACHORY! TRECHORY AND DECIET ABOARD THE HIGH SEAS!!!

Here's my next prediction:

Kagome will fight Naraku. She will not be strong enough, obviously, but killing him will be a team effort, where Sesshoumaru and Kagome earn each other; they will be strong enough for each other.

O////O

All I was waiting for and more.

So much for waiting, you dog you.

...

Does the jewel have to be in a DAUGHTER?

Oo

Could it have possibly been in Souta, on the island, this WHOLE TIME!?

Hahahaha, Kouga. Freaking tool. Put him in his place, Sesshoumaru!

I have a scene in my head for this story that I hope happens. Kagome confesses her love, they have all the smutty sex, and then Sesshoumaru leaves. Because I'm a masochist too. =P

SESSHOUMARU! I just want to yell out to him the truth of the matter! She has the jewel! She has it!

Also, I hope she like... IDK, gets a super long life. I usually dont, because Sesshoumaru x Kagome is  a poignant, short love, but for this one. She is his equal; in every way.

oh my yes. yes yes yes. I am half agony, half hope, waiting for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to come together. I know it will just be perfect, and I'm testing the mettle of my patience!/

;A;

This is progressing perfectly! Your timing is exquisite!

Tricky bastard. Bet he was never a pirate all along! I need to go back through and reread. There goes Kagome, making assumptions. pffffffft. and Sesshoumaru LET HER!

D=

yes yes yes yes yes!

This is amazing! I'm astonished! No offense intended at all, but this is UNIVERSES better than the one you are working on now. Like. Both are good, but this one is INCREDIBLE! It's like it was written by a different person! You are so talented and multiskilled! I can't wait to read the next chapter: i almost didn't review just because I needed to see what happens next!!!

Love this! You are keeping EVERYONE in character! That's AMAZING!

Oh ho? The plot thickens!

This is amazing Sarah! =D I am going to read it all in one setting! Great storyline, great action on the high seas!

And I DONT EVEN LIKE PIRATE STORIES!!!

I'll read the rest now!!!

I finally got the chance to read this all the way through and I must say that it was really an enjoyable tale.  I loved how you used the characters in a wholley different setting, and they were not their typical character (Miroku the monk, Sango the demon slayer, you get the picture).  The demons were demons and family's were a little mixed up, but you made it work.

In the intimacy scene between Sesshomaru and Kagome:  THANK YOU.  I mean he's got CLAWS, he's not going to go there unless he has the ability to sheath those buggers.  Just sayin'.

Anyway, good job and I look forward to seeing more from you.

aww!! cute!