| I like this one!! Its very nice! I did find any spelling error and overall didn't find anything you would need to fixs! Great job!!!    
 
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Apr 2009 | interesting......i suppose that is one way to keep a man coming back for more, she plays the fetish game well...an enjoyable read, good job!!    
       
 
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