Amazing, i like it a lot! I'm not sure if you have any plans on continuing this still, but my vote would be yes.
Can you plz continue this. I really loved it and I would want to know what happens to them after everything.
Yes...continue, please!!!! I think I've already said my peace but just in case you missed it...
YES!!!
This fic is awesome!
YES, you should continue this! It is awesome!
It was interesting in both its ups and downs, but there was a sprinkling of few spelling/word misuse errors throughout. Overall, it still had it's appeal.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
I agree, the idea's a tad overused... but either way, I still want for you to continue with it!! :D
Lovely story. A bit more on Kagome's view on her ending relationship with Inuyasha than her budding relationship with Sesshomaru though -just seems unbalanced to me. Well written though, and a pleasure to read.
Though you Could continue this, I feel it is perfectly delightful the way that it is. I'd only suggest you write more if the inspiration to do so pushes you. Otherwise it's just fine as a stand-alone piece.
Thank you for writing!
I love this story, really. I was reading your ending authors note and I was thinking/hopeing that if you did continue it that you please, oh please!, don't make it like all the other stories out there. I really hope that if you do continue it, it's something original and that is epic! :) However, even as a one shot it's still a really good story, I love how it played out and how you built it to a climax and closed it. :) Please continue to write.
It was good. It makes a good oneshot but if you want to continue it as a full story thats up to you.
There were a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes, and misuse of several words and punctuation. If you plan to make it a longer story you should get a beta-reader to edit it for you. It certainly has potential though.
If you would like this oneshot/chapter edited, I would be happy to do it for you.
Overall it was a good oneshot.
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