Are you going to keep this as a one-shot, or expand it to a multi-chapter fic?  It has the chance to be a great long fic.  Pkeaee opiate?

Really nice. It must have been very lonely for them. And very restrictive. I’ve been reading novels by Laura Joh Rowland about a Japanese detective during the same period. The last one I read was especially about the goings on in the ?oku. It’s called The Concubines Tattoo. You might like them. She paints a vivid picture of this time period. Cheers. 

hauntingly sad yet beautiful, i only wish that you made into a story or a sequel. thank you for the lovely oneshot.

Oh, I really liked this. I could almost see it expanded upon slightly. It was very well written

You break my heart, Chie...! :'(

This story is so sad...! I demand a sequel! I know that it's not unusual for a shogun to have concubines, but he has a wife for goodness' sake. At least, give her a little respect as his wife even if he prefers concubines.

I am so glad that I live in modern era. No offence, but I really hate this kind of story with no happy ending. I mean, reality is already cruel enough and nothing is fair. I feel like crying, and you have to take responsibility! :(

Anyway, I'm looking forward to Dramatic!. :D

_S. Hasegawa

So not fair please continue this please I love how you have portrayed Kagome.  Please please

This is about to make me cry, and I love it. Please write more

Oh please continue this!! It was so good and I would love to see more..

Please..this is so sad. I'm on tears...it's really heartbreaking. I hope there'll be a sequel...I know real life doesn't always have a happy ending. However, please let this one have a happy ending!!!

beAutiful and heartbreaking- i hope you make a story of it.  It would be an excellent read....

mou, stupid Sess. *throws c0okie at him*

pfffffffffffft

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