I found the story really interesting. The characters were easily imagined in my head since I used to watch Inuyasha. It had all the elements of a good short story: love, tragedy, resolve.
9/10! =D
Aww:( I needed a dose of angst, so I clicked and started reading. And gosh, it was so sad too. Your words had a way of evoking the sorrow within, and just as I thought it would end right there with her still hallucinating, he came back!! An interesting twist, that's for sure ;) Good job!
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