WOW...loved the battle. I am glad Kagome held her own for all of it, and didnt submit...Sess's opinion is changing and hopefully the fluffy stuff is coming!
lashon (Chapter 8) - Thu 14 Jul 2011
ooh. i like the fight scene
KT (Chapter 8) - Thu 14 Jul 2011
Wow! ;D
Great idea!This fight not only makes way for sesshoumaru to respect kagome, but also for her to prove her capabilities. You also managed to portray this and make everything smooth over! Great work!
LOVE the fight! show him kagome! great chapter, update soon!
toni (Chapter 7) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
YAH!! U UPDATED!!! I was soo sad now IM HAPPY!!
pinkslytherin (Chapter 7) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
thank you for the update!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 7) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
| Oh snap I cant wait for that update. Wonder how hes going to punish her. ("
I really like where you are going with this. It's evenly paced and a good length too. I often wonder about Kagome's perspective on things. I'm aware she's grieving but I wonder about her past dating and if she craves love? How will she get to interact with others besides Shin as she tries to adjust (how are the demons treating her)? The more I read lol the more questions I have because I'm naturally impatient, which means your doing a splendid job. Keep up all the good work.
dipa (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
Hi. I read the story and its definitely interesting. I want to know how it continues. Its quite good and I hope you post more chapters soon.
One more reader (Chapter 7) - Thu 07 Jul 2011
Hello LF, I am a new reader; I find your story a pleasant read, and like the way it's set up and how it is developing. I love the interaction between Kagome and Shin, but really adore that you have not made Kagome a moussy submisive servant. She is educated and without throwing a major tantrum gets her point across and makes it clear that she is not just a mere servant like the rest; and it should rightfully be as so, since her job is much diferent than those of the other employees at the mansion. She is assertive without being pushy and I really enjoy that. I am looking forward to see how the story developes and hope that your updates will come easy for you. Please update soon again. - OMR
This chapter keeps the flow of the story quite well. There will be a few dust-ups I'm sure, but I love it!
joyouki (Chapter 7) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Oh boy Sess is still going to be an A**...I really laughed again when Shin basically was eyeing Kagome's breast..wouldn't it a hoot if some how she started lactating and had to breast feed him...what would Sess say to that, and how turned on would he get...oh if that could be worked in some how that would be awesome.
Oh no! Kagome is so nice...she shouldnt be blamed ...
KT (Chapter 7) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Great work! I really can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh and thank you very much for trying to update more often!!! We really appreciate it!!!
KT (Chapter 7) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Wow, authoritative and commanding to the max... definitely sounds like sess
kkprincessofdead (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011
| addddddddddddddddddd pleaseeeeeeeeeee
Hey Love the story!! Keep up the awesome work and update when you can!!!
Madwren
jojo661538 (Chapter 6) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
wow that was great keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
joyouki (Chapter 6) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
Boy oh boy! Love the story...But what why in hell would Kagome forgo 250K for freedom...and she is wealthy herself, so why just watch the baby to live in a house better than hers..Is it all for the baby especially for 10 years when she is rich herself?
Miss.Undo (Chapter 6) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
| Please update soon! lol
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