Whoa.

You've done a superb job describing what it must have been like for Kagome trapped in the jewel. I'm actually surprised that she didn't go insane when Sango shut her into that dark box, though!

That was AWESOME! I would love to see a sequal, but if that's not in your plan, then it's still a great ending!

Hi! I like your story so far and I can't wait to read more! I'm not sure I like the fact that Sesshoumaru is already in love with Kagome... are you going to explain that? I'm curious lol :) Ja ne!

interesting story would love to read more

~~Ooo! I am liking this very much! ^__^ I like your take on the way it all turns out; with the way the tachi end up. It feels much more realistic. Keep up the good work! I am eagerly waiting for an update! ;D