this story was short and very sweet. i like the storyline because is was short and kept on point. your way of writing brings the characters to life. it makes me believe that sesshomaru and kagome are REAL, even if they are not. i like the way you write the how each feels for the other. i think if the creator did another volume, and it was about sesshomaru and kagome, it would be read by a lot of readers. just say'n. keep up the good writing. i enjoy your stories. bye
I loved this story. I have one question though. How did Kagome find out about the camera's. They were supposed to be hidden and she knew about them the whole time. I was just wondering. Anyways Great story. Thanks.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Apr 2011
Ivy (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 Apr 2011
Adorably hot!
Drooling right now, if only i had the link to that camera, haha. Completely and utterly smoldering from begining to end and i couldn't stop to review since i wanted to see what would happen next so badly. Aw, i loved this, i wish it was longer but it's perfect the way it is right now.
This was fantastic. I understand why he needed to leave after the deed was done but I also thought he should have at least called her back when he heard how desparate her emotions had become and actually hearing her voice when she called him begging him to talk to her.
Not everything happens the way we may want them to,but in this, I lay most of the blame on InuPapa. He dropped the ball on a specifically important detail in a youkai's sexual life. Sessh should have known that no matter what his father may have thought.
Anyway, thank you so much for excellent and sooo entertaining smut. It couldn't have made me more happier and contented than I am right now. When it comes to Sessh and Kagome doing the deed, you write a most quenchingly amorous encounter. JEN
mle (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
For a practice smut piece I think you did really well. You kept the characters consistent and were able to explain things without jarring the flow of the piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers!
REDWOLF (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
Wish there was more. Absolutely fantastic.
Chibi_Love (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
awww YAY the ending was awesome :D but I hate that it ended so fast can you write about how there life has been after all the chaos and mating Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lara (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
I just realized something ...who was the being that peeped thru her window when she called Sessh terrified originally??did they know who?did she set him up so she could call him?or was it just a random event that never happened again?
I don't know why but now I keep wondering.
lara (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
I have to confess that I put off reading this because of the summary but when I saw it was completed after 4 chapters I decided to take the chance & read it thru. Now I must admit that I regret my initial choice & I'm very glad I decided to read it. It was great & I will think twice before putting off a read I feel unsure of due to the summary.
thank you for a great story that was different
Ashley (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
OMG...um...I need to take a cold shower....
roo86 (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
I am so glad you are bored. If it means we will get new stories I hope you get bored ALL the time! You ROCK and produce just fantastic stories. I hope you are back caused you have truly been missed. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amy (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
GORGEOUS WORK! THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED STORY!IT IS LIKE CHOCOLATE!
yay!!! Awesome story!!!!! :D :D :D
Oh, oh wow! I love your writing! It has been a while since I've seen you're writing, and I must say, it's still as fantastic as I remember. Hell you made me all hot and bothered with this story! :D I can't wait to see what else your cooking up :)
amy (Chapter 3) - Mon 21 Mar 2011
GREAT CHAPPIE! PLEASES SAVE BOTH THEIT LIVES AND HONOR, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
*squeeeeeeeeeees*
Chibi_Love (Chapter 3) - Mon 21 Mar 2011
MG I LOVe your story is soooo hot lol please please update SSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN :D I love your writing style it flows very well from scene to scene allowing each character and their emotions to shine through.
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