I was under the impression that Kags was in hiding with Maru...but the conversation from Inuyasha and Sesshomaru glosses over the fact that Sesshomaru just found them. I mean if she wasn't in hiding Fluffy would have been more persistant and annoying while Maru was younger.
give Fluffy butt hell Kags!
the story's a bit faster paced then I usually like and I think it could use a lil more flushing out plot wise (how exactly the arguement started, the sitch where Ayame has the guts to lie to Sesshomaru etc, where Kags found a place to hide and Maru's growing up years) but I do like the story and for all I know you'll flush it out with flashbacks
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
has Inu known all these years where Kags was? what was his reaction to his half-brother finding them?