Reviews for Power & Calming by Elifina

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Dawn(Offline) (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

Kudos! You have been doing a wonderful job, keep it up!


jk (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

Please update more often i really like this fic and have to wait a lot to read the nxt chap.:( plz plz update more often :D


Rissa (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I think I am in love with this story and can't wait for the next update. So please update soon <3


MARQUISHA (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I can't wait to read the next chapter!!  Kanna is Kagome first fan!!!!!!  Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Brittany (Chapter 6) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Its getting really good. I'm excited for the next chapter. I really like how Sesshomaru is starting to fall for her.


clover (Chapter 5) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

Why is it that whenever a chapter is getting really good that it always has to end? I can't wait to find out what happens next to Kagome. Will Ayumi figure out that Kagome is Kimi after what has just happened? Anyway hope you update soon so that I can find out.


loneshinobi (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

I am loving this story, and the hidden identities !


MARQUISHA (Chapter 4) - Tue 08 Mar 2011

I'm in love with this story!!!  Can't wait for another update!!


amy (Chapter 3) - Thu 03 Mar 2011

INGENIOUS!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Thu 24 Feb 2011

interesting.

I like this but i think there are a few things that could make it easier for your readers as well as gather more in the first place.

Rather then constantly saying PV for promotional Video, why not just say Video. it's not a long word to type only 3 more letters, but it wouldn't leave someone who missed you AN's about PV meaning Promotional video, meaning such.

Another thing, your summery seems to have too much in it, and is slightly confusing, it made me, at first want to skip this, but i like to try new fics so i read it, i like the idea, but the summery needs to be a bit shorter and to the point for it to graps readers. if you want you can use this, or use it as a base:

He was leading a double life when he found her and pulled her in as well. She wanted little to do with him, the complications of her own life more stressful with him in it. She walked away from him, and the burdens he brought her never knowing just who he was, and what she would leave behind. Later in life they meet again, both feeling as though they know the other, but complications of the past kept their identities away from one another. Now with scheming grandchild wanting relatives, jobs with jerk-face bosses, who will she like more, the man from her past, or the man he became? *Lots of twist and unexpected turns WARNING: rated M for, language and some mild erotica. Rating may go MA later on.

 


cakeiton (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

I like the idea! And I love everytime Kagome > Kagura


Erika (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

This is a great story so far! Please keep updating!

Keep on Keepin' on,

Erika


beckyducky (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

O.M.G.

I love fics like these!  I think alternate universe is my favorite!  I like your portrayal of Kagome.  She's fiesty but she still has a fragile soul (sometimes).  I can tell that this is going to be awesome!  I totally think that Visual Kei would be rocked by the guys of inuyasha.  So I have several guesses as to the identities of the guys... but so far its just the three of them?  urr cliffhanger!! please update.  It was great to read!


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