*sigh - giggle* Poor Jaken doesn't know what's about to hit him - he's Kagome's now! LOL
Here's an easy phrase to say - Poor Jaken!
It's probably something all teenagers can relate to, when your body is all of a sudden not your own and you can't figure why distances are now different and how come you're still the same, but people are now treating you differently.
Well done on Jaken's perspective.
okay so I love this story, but I had a funny thought...what if he ate the shard? He would have to Poop it out!!!!!!! That would be sooo like Jaken!!!! Sorry couldn't help that one....Glad you updated, this story is strangly addicting..
Lol where exactly is the shard? :)
I like the idea of Jaken getting attention, he really does not get much. He is able to have a humanoid (I think thats the word) form due to the added power from the jewel? So many questions! Can't wait to read more!
Jo (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Hm... well can't blame Kagome for dismissing the little toad.
Though - his face was just as expressive when he was a toad rather than human looking.
Point for Inuyasha for knowing where this is going.
Lauren (Chapter 3) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Does Jaken look that different that Kagome wouldn't know who he was? He has green hair and yellow, toadish eyes and he's wearing that burlap sack he likes to call a tunic. I don't get it. And how could Kagome think he's attractive?! *shudders*
Lauren (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
LOL Poor Jaken. Overgrown and still unattractive. Did Naraku come, transform him and put the shard somewhere vital (like in his heart or brain)? Or is the shard the reason for his transformation? And how'd he get close enough that Rin didn't flip out, jump on "Ohh and Ah" and run/fly away? Hmm...
Luna (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Uh oh indeed! I dont know to feel sorry for Jaken... or relieved!
Ceysna (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Oh no.... She'll make up for it now will she? *sighs* I almost feel sorry for Jaken... *brightens* great fic! I love it so far! Hope to see a update soon-ish.
uht oh...If Kagome isn't careful I see warts and tadpoles in her future....I mean even though the cover the the book has changed, the pages still read the same...Jaken-sama while we love your surly little green butt....are you capable of affection to someone other than Sesshomaru-sama?
Glad to see a new chappy as always, you rank supreme as one of my favorite authors!
Fox (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
/giggles
Oh, Kagome, what have you gotten yourself in to?!
L-desu (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
A promising start. I'm a little wary of the "beautiful Jaken" concept though. lol
Fluffy (Chapter 3) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
lol poor jaken
amy (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Feb 2011
CLEVER,MORE!
Fox (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Feb 2011
LOOL. XDD It was an honor to collude with you. TTuTT now that I got to read it I think I did an.. okay job of illustrating that part. Or sommat.
fFFFF XDDD the mental image of the lightbulb moment is classiccccc.
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