I have to say, I like this story. I am so curious about this new enemy... and Kikyous betrayal. Well, we will see, which side she really will betray. Inu or the foe... ;)
And I don't like Inuyashas newest thoughts... or emotions... or whatever... towards Kagome... I really hate that boy and hope, he doesn't get the idea, that he could still have both Kikyou and Kagome...
Oh Kagome... I think... she just left her brother back behind to fend for himself. That little boy has lost his family and the only one who is alive, is back in a time, where she is not really needed and away from him. And Inuyasha smelled Souta. He smelled the fear in him. I guess, there is a slip in her character, for Kagome would NEVER leave a loved one behind. Especially not Souta, her only relative, as it would seem.
I can just hope, that he is fine. ;-)
pls, update soon.
cheers
This is a really lovely story. But I seriously cant wait for thing to unfold even more. Like where sota is and the whole kikyo being used thing....
I really like this story:) I see you haven't updated in a while, but I can't help hoping this piece of genius hasn't been abandoned! All the best to you:)
~Siki
Fluffy (Chapter 2) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
love it! cant wait for next chapter :)
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