Great start to a amazing story! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Hope you update soon! :)

Great chapter; great story! I would love to see Sesshoumaru laughing--great mental visual. You are doing a great job with characterizations.. Update soon.

Aww, poor Kagome! I almost cried. I really like how you write for Sesshoumaru! Please update soon ^o^

thats freakign AWESOME! i love this! more please! and seriously someone's got to kick kouga's arse when this is over!

Great start!I really like how this differs from what i've read.Please please update soon! :D

I love where this is going! Its slightly different then the usual hormone induced situation and I love the addition of Shoki!!! Very original!

I look forward to reading more of this delectable story.

This is refreshingly original, I love it! Keep it coming ;-)