MORE UPDATES, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! LET THEM MATE SOON! KEEP "Club Hypnotic" as a title , it fits the story.
Hey, I just started reading this fic and I saw a little discrepancy. In chapter 4 you wrote "She finaly though of Shiori a sweet half demon girl" then in the next chapter you put (she's a full demon in this fic) just thought you overlooked it. I'm not sure if you were looking for constructive criticism or not but i look forward to the rest of the story.
