the story is so well written. its terrifying but at the same time its not hard to understand sesshoumaru. you'ev shown us what his thoughts were, his state of mind was, what drove him to take such actions. i'm not saying that doing it was right, but you cant hate sessoumaru. anybody would be affected by such events... the rape victims or the loved ones of the victims.... Its such a horrible fate to befall anyone... she was such a good person.... its tragic... and enraging... my heart goes out to the ones who have suffered such... if one tries to put themselves in their places then they would have a better understanding of what they must have gone through... i'd just say that it was 'karma' that got them in the end... i'm not really feeling sorry for the 13 bastards. actually i cant help but think that they deserved what was coming for them. they asked for it. karma. i like they way you have potrayed sessoumaru, he is intelligent, smart, cruel, vengeful but yet mostly calm and collected. reminds me somewhat of 'dexter'. he is taking his revenge in cold blood. doing nothing that 'he feels' is unnecessary. its not some gross hakking and chopping... correction, not 'too gross'. lol its AMAZING the way he loves kagome ! SIMPLY AMAZING ! and his determination to bring her justice... he is still so in love with her! and my god! his devotion! (amazing) so grief struck over what his poor angel had gone through... and her death must have skrewed him even more... no wonder he is doing, what he is doing. You are a great writer! do keep it up. :) can't wait to read more!
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