OMG YES!!!

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHhahaahhaahah . ty 

That is awesome! Pokemon and shiny. I relly didnt know what they were going on about at first but the shiny thing makes me laugh though i was suspecting something like that! SHE'S SHINY!!

O_O

This was strangely hilarious :D

I think this will move you up to #2 on LPG's Hit List. I'm still laughing! However, you wrote this one too fast, Girl! I caught a couple of things:

spouting off things that Kagome swore [was] were tingeing (the verb refers to THINGS which is plural and requires a plural verb)

she was pressed… up… against

“What are you doin’[!] ?”  Inuyasha yelled.

I have some issues with your comma use too, but we can discuss that in a less public domain if you wish.

ROFL!  Seriously, I was laughing out loud.  That was cute.

...teehee, awesome

Thanks for explaining the shiny Pokemon thing. I read an IY-Pokemon crossover (only 1 chapter so far) & Kagome was turned into a shiny Pokemon by an accidental wish she didn't even know she'd made & I was wondering what a shiny was since they don't mention shiny in the anime & I've only read maybe half of the 1st manga a few years ago.

LOL

Hilarious and absolutely awesome! I need to learn to draw so I can do something with this!

it took me a second to realize what you were talking about...I haven't thought about pokemon in years. This is freaking hilarious though once I realized what you meant, and you're right his coloring does fit the theme....