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I am still in love with this style you're using for this. Beautiful.
I would like to know what type of world they are in! This is going very nicely so excited for the next chapter.
kagome has brown eyes... luv the story :meow:
Wooo hooo :)
Keep it going!!!!
I think you did well making that a shorter chapter, it did help capture the passion and the mood. Very well done! Keep up the good work :D
hohoho! This is getting good! Sesshoumaru 1: Inuyasha 0. Hehehe. I love it!
hhahahahha yes indeed, I don't think Kagome would obey him at all, "heroine"? I don't think as Kagome as that, LOL hehehhe, indeed the fangirls would obey!!! him, and his every word.
Great Story!!!!!
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I was so excited to see another chapter I chased the kids out of the house, I needed the quiet to enjoy this chapter. I'm so amazed the way you write. Within the first few lines I feel as if I'm a shadow watching it all, feel as if I can feel their powers beating for one another, feel the passion he has for her and now the surprise she has for him. I will be waiting on pins and needles till the next chapter is out, drabble or real chapter your words flowed like water.
Oh wow! I love it! Pleaseee update soon ^_^
the first chapter took my breath away. The writing is so descriptive and beautifully written. Well done; can't wait to read more!
I absolutly love it, make it a chapter story; the story sounds very intriguing it would be a waste to leave it as is. I hope to read more. =)
Oh! please don't leave this as a oneshot! I love it too much! The plot was just starting you can do so much! (obivously you can tell that I love this story!)
I found it fascinating. It manages to stand alone, but there's also room for continuation if you decide to grant us your readers a chance to see how Sesshoumaru courts Kagome. Be interesting to get back story too.
There'd be some interesting tension between the 4-some down the road. I don't know if I should write it here :)
Awesome chapter.
continue it and update soon
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....................... 8D that was pretty amazing!!!!!! please continue to write it! not just a one shot......
this is a really good story. the concept is new and fresh. i would love to see more. sorry avout the odd words after this. i posted this response on my phone. this isba ii
Yes, yes, YES - the reader finds it most interesting! :)
Beatiful but also a very painful beginning - I can only sympathise with Kagome.
Please, do continue.
Awesome story!! You must continue it! I love the plot and the possessiveness that Seshomaru is showing. ^.^ Keep it up!!
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