I don't usually read this type of story, but I thought I would give it a try. So far it is different but interesting. You have my curiousity so far. Thanks.
| Hi, I have been enjoying your story so far! :) I actually decided to look into your other stories because there's another one of your's I've been reading! Your English is very good! :) I didn't notice anything with your other story, but this one I noticed a few minor things here and there, such as using the wrong tense or having words slightly out of order, but it is clear what you're saying. I don't mean any offense, but I just wanted to let you know that I saw a few small grammatical errors! But it's not a big deal! :) I love your story either way! :) I can't say that I can write stories in other languages, so I think very highly of you! :) Well, I can't write stories lol xD darn... hehe ^^;; anyway, you have an amazing talent! Thanks so much for writing and I hope the pregnancy goes well! Take your time, take care of yourself, and relax! I'm sure everyone is understanding! :)    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 19) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | Congrats on your pregnancy , I loved this chapter and can't wait for more hopefully for me I'll decide to make an account by then lol.    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 18) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | Oooo the court case things bouut to get good    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 16) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | Awww, I love there tender moment ?(^o^)?    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 12) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | TT-TT so many emotions    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 7) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | Love this chapter    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 3) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | This chapter pulls on your heartstrings a bit.    
 
Mangageek (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 | That was so sad but so sweet and defenitly well written.    
 | I vote for the stupid little flunkies of the one girl to get a slightly lessened sentence. I suspect they might have been at least partially bullied into their parts in the plot. Is there a difference in sentence within this court for pleading Guilty or Not Guilty? Kouga & Ayame's littlest is SO cute! ^_^ Thanks so much for writing!    
 | AW!!! this was getting so good!!!    
 | Can't wait for the next one!!!    
 | please update soon this story has captured my heart    
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