Great story, keep it coming.

this is like eating a rich and delicious cheesecake one small bite at a time and being forced to wait for the next delightlful mouthful.  Awesome.

I can't wait to see the next chapter.

:)

Looking forward to the next chapter.  XD

Hmmm :) This is really going to be an interesting story! I'm excited! You have a great start so far :)