Oooohhhhh. Great update. Loved the cliffie. I'm anxious to see how she's going to react to her change... but even more-so, I'm anxious to see how she responds to the news that she's Sesshomaru's intended.
eeepp beast!! didn't realize it would go this far in the transformation... so no part of miko is going to be left in her body, not going to be mixed. definitely interesting... can't wait for more!!
Ajah Spencer (Chapter 4) - Tue 21 Sep 2010
You have got to do the next chapter like today. I love the fact that kagome was with sesshomaru when she was going through her change. You really have to finish this story.
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o!!!!! this is AWESOME! *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEs*
sophie (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Sep 2010
Oh la la! what a delight ^_^ thanks for sharing!
This is a very interesting chapter. It takes Kagome being the heir to the Southern Lands for Inuyasha to realize that Kagome is not the same as Kikyou? Come on, he can't be that stubborn. Then again, he is. But oh my, is Sesshomaru in for the ride of his life as Kagome pounces him. Wonder what she'll do now that she's awakened as a youkai. Can't wait to see what happens.
Yet another very good chapter. This story has so far been excelent. Thanks for posting it.
Oooo very intense! Great job, can't wait to read more =)
iLolita (Chapter 3) - Wed 15 Sep 2010
Oh my gosh Love it! (did i say that already?) ^_^ Lol Cant wait to see how she looks!!???! Must Read Moar!!!
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVES this! your making it so much more awesome then i had ever thought it would be!!!! *pounces you*
Wow! This story is great!! I would also like to bribe you with c0okies to update soon!!!!! :3
nice job!! i hope all is well and great story! i'm guessing at the end means that sesshoumaru and kagome are betrothed?? nice job!! keep up the good work and good luck!!
| Yay!! Updates!!
Nice chapter. Good flow and overall portrayal of the characters. As far as errors go, I think I only caught one. You stated that Iunyasha begins 'sprouting' profanities as opposed to 'spouting' them.
Good, good, good! Can't wait for the next one!
This is a nice update. I can just hear Inuyasha's reaction, "The hell you're taking Kagome with you, ya bastard. She belongs here. No way in hell I'll let you mate her. She's mine!" I'm loving this with every single chapter. Can't wait for more.
Monique (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
I'm not usually a fan of 'kagome is actually an inu yokai' stories, but so far this one has captured my interest. Sorry my review is lacking in constructive criticism but I'm not a writer, so I am hardly qualified to tell you how to be a better one. I can tell you that I am enjoying the story so far and I hope to read more.
"This Sesshomaru will honor that pact."
Heck yah! Great dialogue!! I love this story so far, glad you decided to adopt it as your own. Look forward to more:)
iLolta (Chapter 2) - Tue 07 Sep 2010
Oh my gosh I've only read two chapters but I'm already hooked! Please continue!!! I can't wait to see how she looks as a Inu
i love this! :3 i cant wait for more *wiggles c0okies at you again*
This is absolutely AMAZING!!! I love when good authors can pull off Kagome being a demon. It just makes my day. I enjoy (adore)your background story on the life before the Fuedal Era. Please PLEASE continue!!! I love it :D !! Thank you so much
~Mae
Great beginning I cant wait to read more.
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