Great story, keep it coming.

Ohhh this is going to interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next, nice update& keep up the good work :D :D :D :D :D :D

Nice update!! :)

I like this a lot so far!

Great job!! Keep up the good work and update soon :D

this is a good story but i cant help but feel that its moving too fast did she get changed into different clothes but other than that keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^