Holy Cow. I started crying at the first. Stopped. Read on. Cried some more. Stopped. Read some more. Gave up trying to stop crying. Wow. I haven't cried like that at a story in forever. Absolutely beautiful :)
Wow, this oneshot is very well written. I read the warning for it and I even told myself that I highly doubt that I'll cry over it, as there are very few that actually do. This one definitely made me cry, the tears just poured down my face and I just couldn't stop as I read it. It was that good and at the same time, very sad. It would have made for a very good ending to the actual series, but then you wouldn't of been able to write this in your own way without getting into some type of trouble for it.
I will be looking forward to any other stories or oneshots you may write in the future. Keep up the good work.
Tear inducing doesn't even begin to describe what this was. It was beautiful.
i'm willing to bet that I cried even harder reading this than you did writing it. Heartrendingly good.
Kimiko Doll (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
I feel like you sould continue this story. It needs a sequel. I wish someone could continue this story.
Pebbles (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
| T_T Well you DID warn me.
I can't believe how much that moved me. It moved me to tears. You felt their grief and it was strong. VERY strong.
I very much like how you left the will and testament. It was a flare for both old and newer traditions. Her leaving it as a songpiece is very much like her character.
I think the tears started flowin' when Shippo and Rin realized she was gone and why there was nothing that could bring her back, not even Sesshomaru himself. I also like that you didn't leave any reasons as to why. It would've taken away from the theme and feeling of this piece.
The scene at the end, oh man, I don't think I stood a chance of not crying. His whispered words and surfacing grief.... I applaud you for that. Cause even with writting something like that, I would've been crying myself.
That was great.
Lily (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
This was a very sad piece, but I really appreciate and respect it. It's a wonderful one-shot. I think I'll draw something about this. Is there any favorite scene of yours that includes both of them?
MidNigh (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
OMG that was almost the saddest thing I've ever read!! I was really well written though.
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