Noticed I tried to show you the wrong thing. Gomen. The part where Inuyasha is telling Sesshoumaru that: "I think I she is better off with you" is where I noticed two I's. I was unclear of if that was how he typed so fast or something. ^^; Gomen
| So, Sensei...I've read the first chapter and I must say it is off to a good start. I love how you intertwined school while teens goofed off in an online game, then having LordSess play it off cool like and have Kagome all @///@ and stuffs. I did notice a typo (Though it may not really be a typo, but I'd like to point it out) "Yasha4K: I mean girl:P Then again sometimes I think I she is better off with youYasha4K: I mean girl:P Then again sometimes I think (I) she is better off with you" The I i put in ()'s seems like it was there by mistake. Other than that I loved reading it. Also, that game sounds like RUNESCAPE! XD
    
 
Dr. Tran (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Aug 2011 |    
 | Update? :P    
 
Lilith (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Aug 2010 | This is going to sound super nerdy.. but does this sound like Runescape or what!? I'm a nerd.. so meh :p
 Anywaysss, nice start~
 I'll be waiting for the next update :)
 Until then,
 Riku~
    
 | this seems really interesting!  (I understand games, I'm just a really bad gamer, but) I like this idea, can't wait for the update!    
 | getting interesting ;] update soon!    
       
 
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