I have to say, I really enjoyed to plotline in this one. It was different than most I have seen/read. I found it touching and frusterating at turns. The parts with the death of their pup was particularlly hard, having been in that situation personally. But I felt you did a nice job over all, especially for a first fict.
(Chapter 14) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
A mind blender of a chapter... good work!
Wispr
(Chapter 13) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
You have a truly twisted mind you know that!? Bloody funny story you got going here.
Wispr
(Chapter 12) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Now talk about split personalities! I like how you got the wedding cancel, wondering how Kagome's family will react.
Wispr
(Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh bloody hell the ending was funny... so hope the wedding gets called off though!
Wispr
(Chapter 10) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh can't wait for when the news comes out about Kagome... good chapter!
Wispr
(Chapter 9) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Good chapter, you really make my head spin with all of the secret identities! lol
Wispr
(Chapter 8) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh now that was a surprise where Kagome woke up... interesting way to write the chapter... worked well with what happen in it.
Wispr
(Chapter 7) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
You really got things rolling along now... good job with how Kagome is suffering from her rememberings.
Wispr
(Chapter 6) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
A truly heartwrenching chapter for Kagome... like the pizza-boy bit also.
Wispr
(Chapter 5) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
A good chapter though didn't Sesshoumaru already visit that restaurant before?
I like how Kagome is having second thoughts about Hojo.
Wispr
(Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
You really have created a twisted story... good work on getting the demons into today's society.
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Glad to see Sesshoumaru isn't alone... like how Kagome is slowly remembering.
Wispr
(Chapter 2) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh bloody hell now that was a terrible ending... great chapter!
Wispr
(Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
A nasty but believable first chapter... good work.
Wispr
Eru (Chapter 3) - Thu 16 Jul 2009
| It's actually very boring.
But, eh.
;shrug;
Sable (Chapter 26) - Mon 26 Jan 2009
This story took me a couple of days to read, and it was well worth it! It was one of the best stories I have ever read. I really love it. Keep writing, I want to read more from you! ^^
Ashes (Chapter 24) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
oh so lame! Gaaaaaahhhhhh! my heart it breaks.
Question: Why doesn't she remember what has happened since after the last battle?
This chapter brought up a question... Did kagome's family still remember kagome's adventures or was it forgotten by them too? And I really enjoyed the twist with the return of her memories, hopefully she'll remember the years she's been living soon for sess
Oh, that's hilarious. First his determined hand, then a lapdance. Poor Sess.
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