I'm liking it. I have to say, 'Darlin' is a nice change to the normal 'wench' and 'bitch' heard from InuYasha's mouth. Heh. I'm liking the way this is coming around. Can't wait for more!
Btw, I love the line: "a vanilla girl in his rainbow sherbet world." Brillant!
I have to admit that when I read the first chapter I thought this story will be purely just smut. WHICH I LOVE! But I can see now that this story has a bit of meat to it. I can't wait to see how you proceed with this.
Aw poor Kagome. I knew she asked for it as soon as InuYasha heard a noise lol, shows how twisted I am :P
Good chapter! Can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction ;)
This seems good as :) Kagomes fantasy sounds HOT! Lol update soon please :)
Kyaaaaa :D I'm delightfully mortified and intrigued
Lexie (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Jul 2010
*wolf whistle* oh yeah!! that definately not one fot the kiddies to be reading!
please update
Nice saucy prologue! Can't wait to see what chapter one is like ;)
kara (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Jul 2010
Please tell me you did not change Kagome´s appearance, why else would she see herself as a redhead? It´s a shame to change her into anything else, she´s beautiful just the way she is.
I hope that she had a few relationships herself. It would be nice to see her as an adult and not just a nice and naive girl who lusts after her roommates in sectret. I could never understand authors who refuse to make Kagome an adult and always give her the personality of the fifteen year old girl she was, no matter what her age is in the fic they are writing.
looks good so far, I look forard to reading more...hoepfully soon.
BUT, you need to add a disclaimer, stating that you do not own the characters of InuYasha and are making on profit form the use of the characters.
Aww man!! How can you leave it there!!!! That was great! Haha i kinda feel that it was a bit description was too hurried for Sesshoumaru's. But it was still very interesting...
I want to read more!!!
Oooooo.... so mean. Can't wait for the next update.
That was definitely HOT! I am not-so-patiently waiting for the next chapter. Good job so far! Kagome is a very, very lucky girl indeed.
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