this story was an unexpected one. i never would have thought of a fiction were sesshoumaru would be a virgin. this was a very good oneshot. i still prefer your chapter stories though. your writing is the best and i look forward to more. c'ya'. 

omg how could you leave it like that about the condom! i love this story.....i am sadened by the end of it when it was a wonderful love story in the making.

OMG That was so lemony!!!! And Sess better not screw this up about "love"....eeeewww!

I love you! That ending was perfect!

YESSSS!!!! wonderful!! hahahaha you left an open ending there though......more?

I cannot understand what could cause you to feel that you must end this wonderfully entertaining fic that brings so many memories of my first time to mind, but since you felt it necessary, allow me to say you did a thoroughly excellent job.

The writing style was totally different from your usual but you pulled it off well. I also liked that you added a few sentences in just the right places...like when Sessh went back at Kagome's mother, showing the woman that he was not some juvenile deliquent or a sperm donor like his father. He showed her he was not one to be triffled with and that Kagome was not some conquest.

I loved how he questioned if he knew what love really was and wondered who he could ask so he could know for sure if what he felt WAS love. Even though it was hard having Sesshoumaru dog himself like he did, I was so proud of him for his concern and thoughtfulness when he and Kagome finally were able to agree to commit the deed. Too bad neither one of them thought about the condom!  JEN

Aww, that was wonderful! Great work =D

oh man you cant end the story here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved it so much. i was so happy to come back from a trip with no internet and see how much you updated!

i loved the twist of kags making sess jealous. and then how sess confronted her mom, and they are finaly together!

please re consider contiueing this! maybe she could get pregnant, or see how they finaly get kags mom over heer prb. PLEASE!

OMG! Finally! Sesshoumaru finally did the horizontal tango! And they forgot the condom!!!! That is one of the more prominent Oh shit! moments! I just had to facepalm after that.  I love this story!!! Good Work chica!

Yee Haa! Sesshoumaru's finally going to do the mad, wild, passionate, monkey dance!!! I loved how he finally allowed his temper to flare!! I thought his arguement with Kagome's mother was amazing.

I'd love to say more but I'm having some difficulty with my computer and need to shut down. Just know this was a fantastic chapter.  JEN

I can understand Mrs. Higurashi's hatred for the demon race, but honestly, this was too much!! I wanted to jump in there and give her a piece of my mind and perhaps, a kick in the head as well. Poor Kagome, I can just imagine how stressful this had to be for her. Nothing feels worse than being torn between someone you grew to love and your loved ones. I am glad Sesshoumaru was being strong and supportive though; she could  not have managed the stress on her own. I am a little annoyed to see how the confrontation between mother and boyfriend go so badly, and hope to see more positive progress soon.

Anyway, back to the story. GO SESSHOUMARU!!! ALL THE WAY!!!! He is FINALLY doing it right, and oh, he definitely deserves some naughty fun after all that drama!!! Sperm donor and half-breed can TOTALLY wait. Looking forward to chapter 6! :) You're doing a fantastic job, dear!

LOL you go Sesshy!!!! Get your woman!!!

uh oh!!! so close.....

Stop torturing me already! Great story BTW.

No offense, but I think I'd enjoy this much more with some added dialogue. It's nice hearing Sessh's thoughts but is it meant to be a totally one sided prospective?

Oh and  I rather liked your sense of humor. I especially liked their father being called sperm donor. Oh yes, it definitely fits.

I also feel that he's dogged himself long enough.    JEN

I liked this chapter. I get how you're writing Sesshoumaru, but his whole "woe is me, I need to jump in front of a bus" is getting a little annoying. But, never-the-less, this is very entertaining, I wonder what Kagome will do now. Had he mistaken Kagome for Kikyo again?

why are you treating my Sesshie so cruel?????????

how long is he going to have to suffer?

why is he plagued with such a horrible family?

poor, poor guy!  you're going to have to make Kagome treat him extra nice, after all this suffering...

Oh for the love of... this just has to be THE most embarrassing thing to have happen to any guy! I feel sooo bad for him. Then, to top it all off, you've got people staring at you and laughing, giggling, and making you feel so embarrassed and ashamed. I've known of a few guys that said they wished they could have just died then to hear the giggling and laughing from the nurses and the jokes that just didn't die...

After all this humiliation he had to endure, only to find out that it's his own father's fault he can't have a relationship with his girl of choice. That male is incorrigible. He needs to be seriously hosed down. Talking about getting in touch with yourself, Sesshoumaru's father needs to stop acting like an animal in constant heat and act like a responsible adult. If there are little blue pills to help get it up, I'm sure there are equal little pills to help  keep it down and if not, castration is always an option. (or shall I say, 'neutering'?)  JEN 

so now we find out kags mom problem! whats sess gonna do to change it. i hope sess dosent get so humiliated to much more! cant wait for the next update.

Hmm, Sesshoumaru's in quite a quandry in this. Poor thing. I have one suggestion for him as to why he's having problems 'doing the deed'.   With all the open and graphic details of his father's sexual exploitations being rammed into his AND InuYasha's young minds, they both have been negatively affected. InuYasha has possibly turned to males and Sesshoumaru has failure to complete the launch sequence.

And Sesshoumaru should have replaced Kagome's fingers with his own since she had herself nicely presented right there for the taking. I'm sure she wouldn't have objected to the switching of hands if he wanted to.

Either way, it was an interesting writing perspective. I'm sorry to hear you're having so much stress and writer's block. Maybe you should just read some fanfics and watch some good flicks instead of writing for a few days. Take a break, stress can do some mighty mean things to you, and you'll never know when or how it will manifest itself.  This is one reason I've taken to reading fanfiction. If you need someone to listen, anytime, I'm good at that.   JEN