You need to learn how to use commas... or how NOT to use commas, however you want to look at it. The grammatical errors make this impossible to read.

This was okay. Though you should put in a flashback to how Sesshoumaru joined the group. Also is he and Kagome friends? or are they just allies? Anyways update!

I wish that you would have made this a chapter story. It was actually pretty good. Plz update!!