I am gonna guess the North America is the land he talking about but it could be Iceland. Thanks for the update. I loved the fight scene and can't wait to see what you have in store for the group.
Yes I agree.
The way U are portraying your OC youkai servants is exactly I believe how did and fashion style of the era. Very nice indeed I am happy on reading and way go Jaken in IC sense he spoke up for Kagome.
Again I’m very impressed and satisfied with out this chapter turn out as with last one. IN all honest so far the story Is looking better and better by the chapter I read and the uploads U make. I like the kimono you are having Kagome wear s,yes Pink does suit her since her room and some close she has are in pink even her miko aura is some areas of the anime.
Another awesome chapter! I loved the end-not cliffy like the others but, like you said peacful-a real "ah" moment. :) LOL I also like the part at the end with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha talking about the world. LOL made me chuckle and was a nice brother moment. I'm glad you mention Kouga-I was starting to wonder what had happened to him...though I guess I still don't know. He's like a shadow i'm waiting for to jump out of no where. :P but i'm not worried Sesshomaru can handle him.
Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait to read more!
Green country on top of the world huh? LOL, would Kagome like living there in the ice and snow?
Since I'm the only reviewer on this chapter, I won't spoil it :)
Good interlude, and wow, Totosai is icky!
So far so good I like how your progressing this chapter and with all info you are using to make it more realistic from the manga version. I cannot wait to read more.
Fantastic chapter!
MWAHAHAHA! Inuyasha was so funny in the last part of this chapter...he got licked.
wonder what the old coot is up to? Thanks for the update.
Ot oh, Totosai is up to something. Someone needs to draw fan art with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha next to each other with InuYasha's new markings xD
Yeah!! Loved how you got our couple back together! Thank you so much for up-dating so quickly-I was literally jumping up and down when I got the alert. :) Keep up the awesome work!!
Hello-
I'm new here I started reading this about 3 days ago, I've been dying to review but I had to register first & today I finally found the email from here so I could confirm my info ,log-in & review. I have to say that I love this story. I have always wanted to join this site & now that I have I will be reading & reviewing as often as possible. This is the first story I've read from here & from this author. I'm excited to have found a site other that FF or AFF as I am well over the age to have someone censor a story I want to read.
Thank you for a wonderful story I can't wait to finish but I will continue to review every chapter or few. If it was an ongoing story I would review each chapter & for an already completed one I will still try to review as often as possible as it's still my first time reading it.
Thank you for your time & attention & for giving me the opportunity to read your work. I believe that those who can write a story like this & make it their own takes a gift that not all writers have so I must thank you for sharing your gift because if you don't write,I can't read.
Respectfully yours-
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yayaya thanks for update and the great make-up
There were 12 sits and lol! I almost died of laughter but I can't since Im in school reading this. (Sarina, the little fox kit that I created in an unplublished fanfic, laughs and licks her tongue at Inuyasha while dancing around with Rin and Sarren, her light blue eyes shining and her light silvery pink hair dancing with the wind.)
Ah! Cliffhanger!!!! Please up-date soon, I am dieing of suspense! Poor Sesshomaru...and Kagome too. LOL Though I am looking forward to seeing how she reacts when she realizes that he is taking her words quite literally. Though, following the story line, I think he will be just out of sight protecting her. Right? Ah well I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter-keep up the awesome work!
Thank you for the update. What a fight can't wait to how they makeup.
wooo wonder what you have planned next. Thank you so much for the update. It so sweet how Sess won't leave her side.
AAAHHH! Cliffee! Excellent Story, Please update soon!
I like this story but I do have a suggestion.
Its good but maybe changing the ING's to ED would make it easier to read. I had this same prob when I was writting my first story and somebody pointed it out for me. To many points of view make it kinda confusing, But I like your story either way! Hope you dont get mad.
Here's and example
* After Kikyo left Inuyasha remembered that he was suppoded to fetch kagome from her world. He stepped out of the woods and suddenly got a whiff of kagome's smell. " Oh man...did she alrady come by herself." He wondered if she had seen kikyo and him together. " Kagome usually does" he said to himself. He picked up his hated half-brother, and his followers smells. * Well, they were here already when I got here. Thats why I had to sneak into this grove. When kikyou suddenly appeared, I wondered what had happened to Kohaku, he was following her now wasn't he?* " Keh! Kagome's probably at kaede's place by now...sheesh, I'll probably have to explain myself after she sitsme ten times." He said to himselfand jumped away toward the village.
Keep up the good work!
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