*giggling to ones self* thats so awesome. you wrote it really well to, because me personally, could see/feel? the sexual tension. hehehe. thats made my day, sooooo funny fox!
Awesome! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3 I love it! Why have I not already reviewed this? I guess I fail then. XD Great job Fox!
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FINALLY PUT IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting to see it on ehre ever since the night on
MSN!!!
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
| Ha! That was hot! I only hate that there isn't more of it but what a delicious little morsel.
I came over to read Trouble_in_Shangri-La's story when I saw this. I'm glad I opened it. You did a great job.
Kags357
Naraku (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
And Diane, it doesnt say scOlding, it says scAlding. x3
Naraku (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
-coughchokesputtersnerk.- XD!
I've always wanted that question answered!
Roarschack (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
..honestly?
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
LOL!
Amber
Diane (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 May 2010
Well I liked it but I think it has a slight problem in the 1st sentence of the 2nd paragraph; scolding doesn't make sense, scolding is like no, no bad dog, so scolding gaze doesn't make sense unless she's mad at him & that doesn't seem to be the case.
eaconwell (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 May 2010
lololololololol
I will NEVER look at a tootsie pop the same way! LOL! Really good, Fox.
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