"He trudged up the hill, past the nail salon, and back to camp."
XD I love you!! (You should add a quick shot of Kag and Sess at the end to keep it up to code. :P Maybe a "A few feet away, Kagome and her demon lord with multi-personalities were going at it like rabbits, one of which has a very large carrot..." xD
Riddick (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
LOL...that was great...weird... but great
This is so hilarious! I think that kind of problem really fits poor Miroku. If this story isn't going to have Sess/Kag in later chapters I would like to know where you will be posting it so I can keep reading. It is going to have more chapters since it's a chapter story right? I hope so. Hopefully they find that penis and in good re-attachable condition.
FleetingDream (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
Love it!! Your humor is one of the best ones I've ever read, the last line just killed me, Sango having sex with with Miroku's penis but without Miroku lol beautiful
I'm sorry, but the inch worm crack split my brain in half, I was laughing so hard.
Although I do hope for Sango's sake it was an "inches" worm. As in at least 7. Otherwise, I wouldn't be so sure Miroku would want to find it. Anyway, I ramble. Love the story! I can't fathom and can't WAIT to see how SK works their way into this.
oh god, that was hilarious. please continue. xD the world will be a better place because of your humour.
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*Please wait
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*Please do accept our humble apologies for the delay occuring in the writing of this review while this unworthy reader tries to find her fleeting composure again*
As we say down here... MDR!!! (As in "Morte de Rire") I nearly pissed in my pants with laughter. Yea, and even more when my mind provided me with the images of an attack of crazed puddings on the Inutachi (do you know what I mean? lol)
How is this going to turn out as a Sess/Kag fic anyway? lolllll
Keep up the good work!! Dewa Mata
Ariel Robbins (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
What have you created?!! That was hilarious! Sidenote, where's the sess/kag action?
lamo......lamo......lamo
^^
*glomp*
you're the best!!!! i love it! i can't wait for the next chapter. great job. i really liked how you gave Miroku the... *clears throat* detachable penis. :P
Chaos_Queen77 (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
Ahahahaha thats great!!! please post more!!!
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
Um, this is going to be Sess/Kag at some point? I mean, it's funny and all, but this site is sort of dedicated to Sess/Kag as a pairing, so...
Wow a monk with a detachable penis?? Where can I buy one of those? I hope some sess/kag can work their way in. Very funny story though.
great job on the first chapter, babe. It's funny how many reviews you've gotten that have beaten you over the head with the fact that this is a Sess/Kag site...and where are they in the story???? Um, hello? It's only the first chapter. Anyway, you are so creative and have great timing with comedy. I am so proud of you.
Wow, I would love to read more, but when is it gonna get into kag/sess?
:)
-FangedBeasty
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