i fell in love with the summary and even more with what you are writing please update soon!! cause i think your on to something amazing the story is sweet but with amount of drama(:
loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Wed 01 Dec 2010
Im def interested to see how things turn out. I kinda wished that you had dragged out the meeting and all of Kagome's friends finding out. Or gone more in depth with howKagome found out. Well the cat is about to be out of the bag and then the dog will come... Im really looking forward to how Sesshoumaru finds out and then what he does about it. I can't wait for more. til next time :)
i'm totally feeling your story so update soon.
wishing u the moon
Inuyana Taishou
i'm totally feeling your story so update soon.
wishing u the moon
Inuyana Taishou
Good story so far! I think you've noticed some spelling mistakes. For instance "youkia" is actually "youkai" and such. But you got the Dai part right *thumbs up*
Looking forward to more~
alisa (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Nov 2010
desu is the japanese verb for is, am, etc. :] hope it helped and I think you might have spelled demon wrong in the previous chapter, it's supposed to be youkai not youkia and father is otou-san or chichiue (otou-san is used in reference to someone else's father while chichiue is in reference to your own father or so my japanese professor explained n.n)
I'm glad this is back on the radar. Just a few questions: since Souta is Kagome's half-brother in this story, does that make him completely human or hanyou? I'm not too sure if Kagome's mother is human or not. And what did Inuyasha's father wish for him other than fulfilling his duties as Prince of the West? Is it about finding a suitable mate (NOT Kikyo)? Hopefully, everyone else is able to knock some sense into him about Kikyo; that she only wants Kagome dead. The only thing she wants is Kagome's soul and alpha status, which I'm sure will never happen, since the group can't stand her. Of course, the undead bitch is pissed about being put in her rightful place by Mabushii. Maybe something can be done about her as far as she's concerned as long as she and the rest of the group are in the Eastern Lands by Kagome's father. Perhaps, he has a thing or two to say about her presence. I also hope Taiyoo gives Inuyasha one hell of a lecture when he finishes his discussion. I also can't wait to see the look on everyone's faces when the concealment spell is lifted off Kagome, with her being Princess of the East. Can't wait for the next chapter.
wow just found this story and boy am i glad i did it has every thing i love in a inuyasha fanfic it has kagome as a demoness and it has my all time favorite pairing kag/sess i love it looking forward to the next chapter wonderfull job
kat (Chapter 3) - Thu 03 Jun 2010
well hopefully ya get a key soon ^^ because til then ima miss reading this story lol its good cant wait til ur able to do more
when everything gets working will you PLEASE continue? it's a very cool story so far.!
Hesunohana (Chapter 2) - Mon 17 May 2010
a good beginning. a bit fast maybe.
Eriean (Chapter 2) - Fri 14 May 2010
i likeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lena (Chapter 2) - Fri 14 May 2010
Keep 'em coming. So far your doing well the only thing I would say is try to expand your chapters, but other than that its looking like it will be a good story.
Beatriz (Chapter 1) - Fri 14 May 2010
The clay pot is a bitch!!!I really hate her!!! >:< Continue with this story I love it!
Lexie (Chapter 2) - Fri 14 May 2010
psh kikyou will never have the packs love or become alpha who the hell is she kidding?
please update!!
plz hurry up and post the next chappie plz plz plz plz!
i like your story so far. please update soon
stars (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 May 2010
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