Interesting. Kinda funny in a way. But you need a beta. That last paragraph scared the hell out of me lol when you pile up so many things like that, you are bound to scare your readers. And the grammar and spelling mistakes is also... annoying in some ways. But the plot seems interesting lol. Not the first time I see Sesshoumaru as a teacher, but kinda the first time I see some drunken action before the whole 'student-teacher' relationship appears.

I would also like to say that the drunken state Kagome 'wakes up' from -- when she's in Sesshoumaru's arms--, is really... weird. I have been drunk and I never get sober like that lol. It would have been best to skip the whole thing, as if she blacked out and Sesshoumaru took her home (maybe while taking the shots she let her address slip? dunno :P be creative :P). But it's not my job to tell you what to write ^^ It's my job to tell you that... nice! Update soon ^^ but get a Beta!!! :P pleeeeaaaaseeee update :)

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