Keep posting!

in this story does his father approve or disapprove of the relation ships because he himself has a nigen partner or a yokai one anyways keep up the great work hope to read more soon ^_^

The story seems interesting but you need to read your work before you post to catch some of the errors.  Also try using Spellcheck and think about finding a Beta.

Good luck

I like the story but you really need a Beta to read your story and fix all of the spelling and grammer errors. If you don't want to do that maybe you should try re-reading the story before you post it. Then maybe you could catch some of the errors.

The plot is good, the execution is REALLY bad. In the very 1st sentence you have a goof, you have; If Sesshoumaru If, it would probably read better as something like; for Sesshoumaru if. You also seem to have random double spaces scattered all over the place, while other spaces are missing. It desperately needs to be spellchecked since you have tons of spelling errors, even simple words are wrong.  Taken not tooken, which I'm not even sure is a word.  On reading further, maybe 2 paragraphs in, this is so bad you probably need a beta to go over it & fix all the various types of errors you have going on.