I love it, all the way through this I couldn't help but squeal over the adorable little Inuyasha! Thanks for a warm 'n' fuzzy read miss forthright!
i think i reviewed already, but i tihnk you should turn this into a series, about their "Troval" more so, how Kagome struggles to understand the world she's getting into, as well as Sess making amends for the human heart, all with lil Yusha's help. I think you could wait for 'White Day' next, and then i dunno i cant remember the holiday but here's a list, and you could make it a once a month update, that spans the time frame in which this "Troval" could happen. I think it'd be very cute, as well as very You. ^_^
List:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_holidays
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_day
Four times I've read this and each time it just gets better! You demonstrate such delicacy in the creation of your characters and their actions. I love the way you describe their society through the character's behavior and thoughts. Inuyasha is adorable, for an interferring little busybody. Their family dynamics are so full of love and respect. I've always wondered what it would be like if the two had been part of a real family, I think you've shown the real connections they would have made if their father had lived. And the tender sweetness of Kagome and Sesshoumaru's betrothal put a 4-day smile on my face! This is such a lovely, romantic story, and all without a single kiss!
she reached up [and pet] (either petted or to pet) the boy’s bangs.
“S’not for you,” Inuyasha argued, “You give [to] dis to Sess.” (One too many tos)
A very sweet and enjoyable story. I absolutely loved little Inuyasha, he was adorable.
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Feb 2010
Oh, that was too cute! I don't know if they do winners for these challenges, but this one is a winner, whether they do or not! Absolutely adorable.
Amber
Very adorable! I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks! ^-^
jazi (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
this is good just like all of your other stories!! please continue!!
So cute and wonderfull for the holiday. I loved the young Inuyasha. I have always wanted to see this setting in the modern era. I hope you fill us in on more over the next holidays. I would love to see what Kagome does to maintain his interest.
Lady20620 (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
One of the cutest things I've ever read. I know it was just a oneshot but I really hope you continue it!
FORTH!!!!! It's wonderful! I loved it!!
This is so cute. I hope you decide to make a continuation of it.
This story was just a big burst of wonderfulness. Will there be more? I hope so.
Roos (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
*Cant stop smiling* Daaamn, I want to be Kagome! What is she going to do next?!?! Please consider expanding the one shot... It has sooo much potential! Imagine the reactions and situations that they can get in to... Well... I hope you do decide to expand it but in the mean time I thank you for this lovely ficlet! *Bows*
river (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
Baby InuYasha was too cute!! And the "not too spicey, I checked!" was too funny!!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
That was very entertaining. You continue to amaze me at how you come up with all this stuff. InuYasha as a child was a nice touch. I liked the Valentine's Day chocolate exchange they had going on too. It all worked very well together. Another excellent story. Thanks for writing it!
Fox (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
Ohmygoodness, this is absolutely adorable! Little Inuyasha had me giggling non-stop!
I love the way you portrayed both Sesshoumaru and Kagome, I've never read a story where she proposes to him- albeit inadvertently.
This actually had my aching for a sequel.
Kiri (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
This is so so so cute! Loved it very much!!! Thank You for writing it! >^.^<
Kiri (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
This is so so so cute! Loved it very much!!! Thank You for writing it! >^.^<
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