WOW! that's all i can say about this oneshot. i think you're improving in this genre of writing. keep it up. c'ya'

You are so talented, what delightful little oneshot!!!

AWWWWW...glad there is hope!

Really liked it! Especially the part about Sesshoumaru receiving an illegal parking ticket!

Another marvelous piece of work!!!! ;-)

~ Silver Silence 89

I can't remember when I enjoyed a fanfic so much. This is truly one of the best things I've ever read- fanfic or published fiction. There were moments when the emotion was so intense, I had to stop reading briefly. I LOVED it.

There is nothing I can complain about and I´m always complaining about something. Good and believable plot, character depth without being corny, no irritating teenaged drama and really hot lemon. Very well done.

What a cute story and a little kiny too!!

This was absolutely fantastic. You portrayed Sesshoumaru's grief so painstakingly realistic. The way he opened his heart to her had me close to tears and when he turned and walked away, I did cry then. When Kagome got into the car, leaving Hojou behind, I did a mental 'Happy Dance" and the loving was 'oo lala". Getting caught was deja vu...very embarassing but funny for their age and so kind of the cop to let them off easy. You're a true gift of talent, Lady O...JEN

Wow! This oneshot was really good! I love a good angsty story with a happy ending, so it was nice to read this fic! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! <3

ducky out!

What a great surprise, Oroyukae!  Especially since it is the best thing you've ever written.  So filled with emotion, yet crisp and clean.  The descriptions were perfect, and really put me in the place and time, as well.  I loved it!  And my birthday is in a few weeks, it's an early birthday present!

Geezzzz...can I just say that..that was just toooo hot..and I want to take Kagome's place. LOVED IT! You have to do more of these...could almost feel the heat coming off the screen.