Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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Ladyfairy (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

gahhhhhhh you cant just leave it there....... finish it soooooon pleeeeeeeease

 


Saeko (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

Ooooh, you witch!! Leaving such a cliffie!!

 

FINISH IT NOW!!! ^_^


krazy4fluffy (Chapter 8) - Sat 27 Mar 2010

Please update soon!!

xoxoxo

I love this... but I don't understand. He said "welcome to the pack.." and she's still wondering if he's gonna take a mate? I'm kinda confused...


GreyEcho (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Mar 2010

Haha! That was awesome. and YAY for the new chapter. :D

I love how she was still thinking. "Sesshomaru was going to kill them all!"

That and the kids dancing around the pile of food. lol.


MissTeak (Chapter 8) - Mon 22 Mar 2010

HAHA WOAH. Now, which breathing female would mind being mistaken for Sesshoumaru's woman?? I SURE WOULDN'T MIND. Unfortunately, it's just that no one thinks so. LOL. Amazing job as always...just five days more, Sesshy, just five days more!!!


Mia (Chapter 8) - Mon 22 Mar 2010

Very Interesting! I'm going to go out on a limb and assume that Kagome will mate with Sesshoumaru... This IS a SesshxKag website after all...


Happy2SeeAll (Chapter 8) - Mon 22 Mar 2010

very well done again! Her position... even the villagers see her position did she not realize it? I cant wait till the next chapter!


krazy4fluffy (Chapter 7) - Mon 22 Mar 2010

I love it. Please update soon.

Thanks.

xoxo


Chi (Chapter 7) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

great story.continue


GreyEcho (Chapter 7) - Tue 16 Mar 2010

O.O Wow! Did NOT see that coming! Good chapter I can't wait to see what happens now.


KillinPerfection (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

"welcome to the pack", shocker?


jgem (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

This is turning out to be a great story. I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru has planned for Kagome, but it looks like he has gotten part of what he wants.


MissTeak (Chapter 7) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

YAY!! :)) WELCOME TO MY PACK! BUT I wonder what evilness dear Sesshy has in store for Kagome! waiting for more!! You did such a great job with this one, Jeni!


MissTeak (Chapter 6) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

oh gosh, how stubborn this evil demon is! I think he is driving Kagome to the brink of insanity with how IMPOSSIBLE he is. But it will all get better, right??:) Great job as always!


MissTeak (Chapter 5) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

OMG he is such an evil brat but I love him to bits!! And Kagome shaking the water off?? PRICELESS!!!


MissTeak (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

LOL. Kagome's inner musings tickle me pink! You're hilarious!! Absolutely brilliant! :D Totally love you loads!

"She was, from now on, a feminist!" GAWD. This line brought me teetering off my chair in laughter.


MissTeak (Chapter 3) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

Awwww Sesshoumaru you selfish cow that was obviously a golden opportunity for you to get that beautiful lady in front of you!!! *kicks fluff only to shriek and run away* He is obviously being mean but OMG I love him so much~ Haha great job dear! I feel sorry for poor Kagome but hey, it's gonna turn out good!


MissTeak (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

I absolutely adore your characterizations! Sesshoumaru is extremely in character, while Rin is too, with her loyalty to people she adore. Well done, it is proving to be a very enjoyable read indeed! But it irks me that the pompous doggy will not give Kagome a chance to speak. HAHA. I'd have yelled the request and watch his face freeze.


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

HAHA tha Jaken-damsel?? Now, that's a disturbing one... *laughs*

 

Anyway, great first chapter Jeni! The plot's well thought out and it keeps you guessing as to what exactly on earth it was that Inuyasha wanted long-suffering Kagome to do HAHA. Off to read more!


Izzy (Chapter 7) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

Holy shiza sesshoumaru's justesting kagome isnt he that sneaky bastard lol XD update soon!! ineed to read more awesomeness ^_^


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