Great story, keep it coming.
Very cute, and some sad, drabbles. Very well done for such small word counts. One thing though, the fonts you started using after chapter four became hard to read, You might want to go back and change them to a reader friendly font. Keep up the good work though :).
Yay go Rin! Like others have stated are these connected or seperate? Either way I like your work and I hope to see more in the future. Hopefully Sesshoumaru wises up lol.
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Just a handful of comments: 1) are these interconnected? They seem like they could be but were a little jumbled in order. It may have just been me, but I wasn't sure. 2) Keep font uniformity. Chapter 4 was a little difficult to read after my eyes adjusted to the font from 1-3 3) were these prompts meant to be a certain length? You might want to include the length of the prompts because there was one chapter that was particularly long, and the point of a drabble is to try and get as much in, in as little words as possible. Its meant to challenge in order to better the writers technique.
I otherwise found your writing style quite enjoyable. Keep it up.
Ikaru (Chapter 12) - Mon 20 Sep 2010
These were all very good drabbles, the only question I have is if they are all inter-conected or independent? There were also two of them they were in a different font size than the rest of them, and that made it a little harder to read them, but other than that these were a very good read, and I'll look forward to more of your work in the future!
Very nice set of drabbles. The only thing I would have liked, and this is just me, is if you would have organized them. I realize a alot of times you write what comes into your head but I found myself going back and forth. It felt a little jumpy because first rin was dead and then she was playing with Kagome, and next Inuyasha was talking about Kagome being dead. I got a little lost at times. That is just probably me and I am not saying the story isn't great. I did like it alot I just got a little lost at times.
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