Nicely done.  Well written and flows nicely.  Great job :).

very poetically written, though there were a little word scambling at the very end when Kagome is talking. I also though it was oddly appropriate (or perhaps "realistic"?) that Naraku's defeat was relatively anti-climactic. "Gone, just like that." is pretty much how I think anyone miht feel after the resolution of their lifes goal.

OOOH, so sweet.  It was short and to the point.  I like this but would like a little more detail.  I can see this being a part of a much larger one shot or chapter story.  For instance how did  Kagome end up being Sesshomaru's mate? and what was the situation between Inuyasha and Kikyou.  That is just my thought overall I thought this was short, to the point, and very sweet.

Very well done, I enjoyed all of their reactions to Naraku's demise. Keep up the good work!