Great story, keep it coming.
Awwwww. This chapter was chock-full of AWWW moments, and it's so sweet that Sesshoumaru actually thought of the three of them as a happy family. :) I love his soft spot for Rin; it's like a touch of light in pitch darkness.
What a delightful contrast to chapter one! 'Green' was definitely fun and light-hearted in comparison, and I enjoyed it pretty much, especially when Kagome mentioned Kikyo and Ayame. LOL.
Oh gosh, this is beautifully tragic...:( *teary-eyed* Sometimes love doesn't have to be happy for it to be beautiful. Nice writing!
Jess (Chapter 1) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
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